Your message is clear, but it can benefit from a few adjustments for smoother readability: "It felt like fate when my lender introduced me to Mary, and from the beginning, she made sure to address all my questions, especially since this was my first time purchasing a home. Mary was incredibly responsive and always on top of things whenever I expressed interest in a property. After a few months of working together, I was able to purchase my dream home, and Mary made the process seamless for me. It was a pleasure working with her, and I would highly recommend her to anyone in search of a new home. Thank you once again, Mary, for all your help and support!"